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February 15, 2010
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:iconbelindi:
Here's something I've been working on to submit to exposé. I know the chances will be pretty slim, but it's worth a shot.

She's a cyborg, ninja assassin of sorts.

Any critique would be very appreciated!
Thanks for looking.

edit: changed eye colour and added cloud gradient to horizon line.
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~alovernotafighter Feb 22, 2010
Hi:wave:
This was submitted in to #Belle-Art's "Critique Wanted" folder, so I'm here to give as much critique I can :)

I think the character looks really fantastic, you can tell a lot of effort has gone in to her, but I think the lighting on her front shoe may be a bit too much, since the light source is from behind her.

The other thing is I think maybe more time should have been spent on the background, it looks good already, but I think the moon and sky look a bit too "smudged".

In general though, a really good piece.
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Mood: Love *Jaxn777 Feb 19, 2010
i. am. loving. this! Great rework! i really like what you did with the horizon line!!! Excellent! Cheers!
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~Duchess-bgd Feb 18, 2010
great stuff
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=goor Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats cool :clap:
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Mood: Love *Jaxn777 Feb 17, 2010
ok - i'm digging this. From the pose to the colors, the stance, the hair thingys - all of this is great. The only thing, imho, is there could be a little more action on the horizon line. It strikes me as a little flat, a little abrupt as the sky meets the water - maybe some faint dark cloud masses or some general color mixing/washes toward the bottom there would liven that part up and still not detract from the overall scene. Something to make the background seem less like a backDROP and more like an environment. Otherwise - AWESOME.
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~Belindi Feb 17, 2010
Sweet. I'll do some experimenting and see if i can improve on that. I definitely agree that it's a little abrupt horizon line.
Thanks a lot for the crit! it's much appreciated :love:
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Mood: Love *Jaxn777 Feb 18, 2010
Cool - hope i didn't offend but your illustration is awesome and that was the only quirk i could see. Great stuff dearie!
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~alex-pol Feb 16, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! I like the movement you brought in :)
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~Belindi Feb 17, 2010
thank you!! :hug:
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*HippieVan57 Feb 16, 2010
awesome work :D
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